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Saturday, October 11, 2008

intro

this blog was decided to be made just for the sake of fun...
dont expect regular post or in fact dont expect anything much...
this blog will most likely be used just for me to write stories...
but if you are lucky or however you deem it you may find occasional rants bout stuff...
of course they will be hidden in story form...
have fun looking for them
and im not bothering with a tagboard leave comments if you have to
i'd love tips on how to improve my writing
but dont mail me on my typing...
i am capable of good standard english...
but just too lazy to write it all out...
so im using its simpler version aka Singlish...
also dont hate mail me its a waste of both our time...
i read comments waste time looking at hate comments...
you waste you own time typing it out...
besides im rather unaffected by what others think of me...
if you think you can change me by posting comments...
have fun trying but it'll never work out...
enough with this boring part...

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hmm what else...
i wonder..
should i start on my stories??
its getting late...
here's a short one...
i hope

Illusion at home

Most kids these days have gotten used to the idea of a beautiful lifestyle. One whereby they were allowed to stay at home all day and as some people says 'relac one corner'. This was how Ryan lived his life. His life was revolving around games. His room was literally filled up with all sorts of games. Board games like Monopoly, Game of Life, Chess and many more, piled up upon them were computer games of all ages. The oldest of computer games was "Spacewar!" and the newest consisted of "Command & Conquer: Tiberium Wars" and Fall Out 3. If you are wondering how this one kid had such a range of games then here's the secret - his parents.

Even after such an amount of games, most of which were never opened, he still clamoured for the latest games console, namely the Nintendo Wii, the Sony PlayStation 3 and Microsoft Xbox360. Being the utterly spoilt brat he was, the first thing he did was to sulk when his parents said no. The parents had no idea what to do as he was their firstborn. Having no experience they gave in to every little whimper he did. Thus he ended up with everything he ever wanted.

However he had no idea how much economical strain he was placing onto his parents. They were barely able to scrape through living with both their combined incomes, they were just able to put aside one thousand after deducting the utility bills. This was bad enough and yet now having an additional kid was worse. They were using more than what they could spare to satisfy their child's wants. Having no choice, they resorted to borrowing money from relatives and friends. Slowly, the closest of people drew away from them due to the large debts they owed. Without an alternative, they looked to the underworld. They took a loan from the loan sharks. The money came with a price. At first things looked up for them. They had extra cash to use, lived a more luxurious life and even 'upgraded' themselves. They moved to a Bungalow in the town area, bought a Mercedes, BMW and even a Lamborghini Reverton.

These soon disappeared when the end of the year came. The amount they owed from 10 million went to an even larger sum of 100 million. How was this possible? Simply by having a compound interest rate of 50%. Without realising, the life they had gotten used to was about to be torn away. All knows about the ruthlessness of these underworld people. The family was separated forcefully, with the woman dragged into a room with about 20 guys (the activity in the room shall not be disclosed but I am sure many knows exactly what happened within) while the male was dragged out and slugged (beaten up). Mercy was shown to the kid but the emotional trauma he had to go through was scary enough.

Little by little the things around him cracked when suddenly he heard

“And that’s what would happen if you treated your child like that.”

Awakening, Ryan’s dad realised how to bring up this first born of his.

“I realise why everyone says you are the best illusionist of all time. Almost 16 years of my life just within an hour. What’s more is that it felt more like reality compared to now.”

Hearing that the doctor simply smiled.


2 comments:

  1. sorry guys had to end it quick it was 2:31 am when i ended...was really worn out...i'd love to have written a thousand word essay...

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  2. HELLO MARCUS :):)

    you write good! anyway write more about your life lah, we'd love to know more about you! okok? heh

    noodley

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